Men are from Mars, Women are from Venus

I thought this was a perfect examination between men and women. The writer used transition words in a lot of his paragraphs. First explaining how women react to something, and then how men react to the same situation, and vise versa. For example. in paragraph 13 through 16 he talks about what men value and how they understand things, and in paragraph 16 he explains what women value. He did a very good job on using different transition words, so I understood exactly who we were talking about and what problems were being stated. I think it was a great idea that Gray did a subject-by-subject comparison, because it was easier for me to compare the differences between the two subjects. If he did a point-by-point comparison then I would constantly have to keep looking back to see if there was actually a difference between the subjects.

I think I would add a better conclusion, because I honestly thought there was going to be more to the essay and then all of a sudden it was over. It just ended talking about only women. I think that the conclusion should be explaining the overall difference between men and women. If they would have combined the last two paragraphs together I think that the essay would have benefited. I thought the essay was very well written, and I enjoyed reading the entire thing. I thought everything he said made a lot of sense to how women and men think about and respond to different situations. It would be so much easier if both women and men could understand how we both think about things. There would never be any problems in the world!